Blindern Wall

I like the central ideas behind this project. I also thought the graphical presentation was very good as it gave a very clear idea of what the aim of the project was.

I thought it was especially clever to include pictures of the actual testing on page 13.

However the text is quite heavy going and it was initially difficult to understand the project described in words but this turned out not to be such problem given the illustrations. It was also good because a lot of thought seems to have been given to the technical side as seen in the illustrations.

I think a better approach could have been to make the illustrations a focal part of the report and describe in more detail how they were made as this would also have summed up the project. However the text describing the background such as assumptions and the design process is good as the reader understands the reader understands how the group approached the project

I also think more literature reference is needed especially in the interview section which should have been describe more but I thought it was a very good idea to interview both computer science and psychology students as these groups would by definition have a different understand of the project. I also thought the conclusion was abit too short and there was no discussion of what would happen next. Could this system actually be implemented.

The reference list was also a bit too short as I am sure more reading must have been done to come up with the central idea. However the inspiration section was very clever as it allows the reader to explore the topic further.

I hope we see an idea like this put into life at Blindern in the near future.

gardo

2008-11-07

osgood

Universitetet i Oslo